F L A S H  D E V E L O P M E N T

After working on flash I produced a initial animation to get critique from my tutor and peers

Self Critique - I think that the tween of the letters is ineffective inside the bomb and needs development as well as the explosion scene where the bomb explodes, very basic and does not perform to meet criteria.

Critique from tutor - The explosion needs re working as well as not blowing up at the start (increasing the bomb at the start) as it is on the fence between bomb and something just expanding. Also work on in to make it more personal and add personality not just the normal bomb blowing up. Adding sound will also improve work

As we can see here i have altered the bomb explosion scene so it is only letters which are used to express the bomb exploding, letters are cent everywhere opposed to the original tween which is shown on the right. Overall the scene is now more realistic and expresses my point more effectively. 

In this scene the bomb does not expand anymore but zooms onto the wick to emphasis the burring of that opposed to trying to make the bomb expand which was ineffective. Also the tween for the letter have been altered so it comes across more clean opposed to being messy and change forms ineffectively.

Adding some final touches I added a bit of personality with moving letters at the bottom of the stage to act like panicking people screaming to add some humor and personality to overall create a truly effective animation.